[Weekly Writing Challenge: Tanka] his rain moment

September 3, 2014 § 6 Comments

boy at window

drips off black hair
and smell of hot chocolate
while watching the ducks
take their turn to play in rain
such a scene I want to freeze

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Written in response to The Daily Post, Writing Challenge, “Full Tanka”

Traditional tanka contain five lines instead of haiku’s three, and 31 syllables instead of 17. The structure is that of a haiku followed by two additional lines of seven syllables each: 5-7-5-7-7.

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